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In Esperanza Rsing Esperanza, Esperanza and Isebel were talking about school. Isabel said she wanted to go to school and Esperanza said she has to go. So im going to tell you my opinion about this.

I think school is a right because everybody has to get a chance to be well educated and have a good job. altough I think that children who dont want to go to school, dont have to go. Most people want to go to school, be well educated and get money but, most people just dont get a chance.
DO YOU THINK SCHOOL IS A RIGHT OR A PRIVLAGE??

In English we have been talking bout our future. I will be telling you what I want in the future.

In the future I want a good job. with a good job I mean a fun and a well paied job. I am not sure what ill be yet. My dreams are to live in a place were I can play football. My parents also want me to be well educated and have a good job.

Football is a very active sport. A player must run, and move for forty five minutes nonstop up and down the fifty meter field. One of the players has to stand free by sprinting away from his marker and get the ball and pass it to one of his teammates. He is always trying to get the ball away from his own goal by stealing it and kicking it to his teammates. It’s late in the game, and his uniform is dirty. The lights shining in his eyes and the crowd cheering. He is ready to do more running. He was wet and thirsty, but he waited till the ninety minutes were finished. If the ball came close he would chase it with lightning speed till he won it like Jhon Hitinga does. He will get the ball even if he would get hurt. He is super fast and skillful so he can win the ball and pass it. Football is all about speed and being active. Football is also about not getting tired fast. Being active is important for the defenders the most because they want to steal the ball and get it away from their own goal. Strikers and midfielders can also use it because if they want to do a counter attack then they need to run as fast as they can and cross it in the box.

The football field is full of active players making it social and forcing their opponents to use teamwork to win. Football is social because there are hundreds or thousands of people celebrating and having fun. There are over a thousand people at the stadium like the players in a team, people on the field and fans. There are also supporters who scream, sing, and do the wave. They are supporting the home team and wearing the same shirt of their favorite’s player. Eleven people are celebrating with each other including the coach at the success of the game. The supporters making the wave and shouting ‘’we are the champions’’. The score is one-zero.

To succeed in football, a player must use teamwork to win. The best team uses teamwork like Man U did when they passed more than one hundred times. If one player is being selfish and never passes like Christiano Ronaldo than he will be the worst player on the field. He will not score as much. Using teamwork, he passes the ball with a good pace to the players upfront, and he doesn’t have to take the risk to run and lose the ball. Teamwork makes it easier because you only have to pass it to one of your players. It’s two-one for the opponent. The team under leadership of the coach changed the strategy to attacking turning the score into a win. The ball was passed fifty times before it smashed in the goal. They never tried to skill their opponent because there was a huge chance they would lose the ball. They used their strategy the whole game. The best skill is passing because you can keep the ball with your team. Ronnaldinho can do the best tricks in the whole entire world, but he still passes allot. Passing is the best way to get passed player. Also instead of running from the wing to the goal you can do a cross. Free kicks can be from far so you can just chip it in the box

In English we are reading a new book called The Giver.
There is no trust in the community. Here the reason. There is a boy called Asher. Asher is the naughty one. he always comes late. He apologizes but doesn’t mean what he says. The class then accepts the apology but without meaning it.

Children are not born in a family. They go to Nurture. That’s is a place where children are taken care of. If a person has problems they will be released. People can also be released if they’re old or as a punishment. The good point is that the community takes care of children but the bad point is that the family cannot raise their own children.

In the society people can get babies from the nurture. They can get them if they are a good couple. You get one boy and one girl. In December every new baby is born. There are groups. There are fifty in a group. Marriage, jobs and family units are assigned. On the one hand the good point is that they give jobs based on your interests. On the other hand the bad point is that you don’t have the freedom to choose.

I think an ideal community would not have any hunger or starvation. If people are starving they can get sick easily because they are weak. If someone has a disease like malaria they won’t be able to recover. Worst case people could even die. People should share the food equally. Maybe people need to eat less themselves, but enough like one plate.

in english im writing a magizine atricle and i came to the point of vioce and word choice.

Mr Raisdana sais that you need write full of anergy, lifely, enthaiasime for your topic. you need to use claer, prisise words. you also need to use synonyms. Synonyms are word that have nearly the same meaning but are diffrent like: big and massive.you need to use words like, run, walk and jump etc… they are doing words, verbs.Also nouns are important. nouns are people, places or things like: a dog a house or doha. you also need to use adverbs they describe verbs like: He ran fastly. But dont forget it takes

In English we are making a magazine article. We have done ideas and organization.

First I had three main ideas and a fact chart. In the fact chart I had questions. Some of mine were: what is teamwork, how is teamwork used and why is teamwork important. We used Supporting facts to back up the questions. We also made three paragraphs using our fact chart. We also used transitions in our paragraphs that we wrote. Transitions are words like on the other hand, but, first, second etc.

The French revolution was started because nobles, priests, first and second estate treated the peasants like animals. They kept all the money, food and water for themselves. they let them pay tax while the peasants were much more poor than the first and second estate. They even stole their properties. The peasants wanted food, water and wealth and get to control the country so they started the French revolution

In English I am making a magazine article why I like football.
1st I had 1 vague topic and that was football. then I made 5 ideas why I like football and they were: 1. play as a team and with my friends, 2. Run/Move, 3.social, 4.tactics and 5. Forget school. Then made 3 main reasons why I like football and they were: 1. Active, 2. social and 3. teamwork. finally I made a clear topic sentence using the 3 main reasons and it is: The field is full of active people making it social and using teamwork to win.

Richard Cromwell was born on the 4th October 1626 and died July 12, 1712. He was in the Parliamentary Army in his younger days. After Olivier’s death he was named lord protector, but he soon had serious difficulties and was forced to give up. Having large debts, he fled to Paris in 1660 to escape. In 1680 he returned and lived in isolation. He was powerful because he was the leader of England, Scotland and Ireland and controlling the army.